People should only concentrate on a single skill for life because it is the best way to succeed. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, the world is increasingly complex, and as a result people will have to good effort to make sure that they'll not be old-fashioned. It's a common belief that people need to focus on a single skill to be success. However, I strongly believe that the world requires more than that, and a skill isn't enough : people have to be more flexible. This essay will explain more.
To begin with, the more skills you have, the more opportunities you will have to promote in your work. Because haing some specialised abilities means that you will be got attention by everyone else. As a result, if your boss see that things, they can give you chances to perform, and if you can conquer the challenges, that's your time. Here's an example. If a boss has 2 journeymen, he/she will find a more flexible person, and give them opportunity to be promoted.
On top of that, you'll probably be old-fashioned if you don't spend time on learning more skills. Because the world is upgraded day by day, thus more new skills will be required, and you will need to "survive" in any circumstances. As a result, if you don't find up-to-date things, you will be left behind. For example, numerous companies are using Office 365, and unless you can master it, you will be sacked immediately.
To sum up, I whole heartedly object that people only need 1 skill to succed, because more than single skill means that you'll may be promoted in your worlk, and multi skills mtans that you will not be old-fashioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, for example, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69201520913 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73696719744 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54752851711 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4264199168 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156034315853 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063188880708 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502299279412 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119426030005 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401337307832 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.