Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Nowadays, more than million tons of wastes have been being produced which from home everyday and some people claim that not enough of the litters is recycled. Therefore, they think the government should have a policy to increase recycling.
It is necessary to say that their governments should take action. For example, providing rubbish bag into each family so that separate a litter and make it to have value. Many waste, paper box or steel from home can sale to governments or decrease council tax. Either, the government should provide junk bank that the citizen can deposit recycled waste and inverse to be some money.
Moreover, the government should have spot advertisement on television to motivate advantages of recycling. In Thailand, my country, we have 3R advertisement standing for reuse, reduce, and recycle and easy example way to do in house such as using less plastics bag (reduce), reuse take away box or sale some paper.
In school teacher teach children how to recycle waste at home and go back to tell their parent and comeback to report their teacher. There is one day a week in order that clean school together which help they have a good attitude in cleaning.
In conclution, it should be good that government make some law about waste tax and make people follow the law by give them back some money. Starting give education at school so that when they growth up the will do easier.
In my opinion, it is very easy to government to do as I mention above to reduce waste from homes such as 3R, junk bank, providing rubbish bins and teaching at school and it will be a good habit and good in long term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
Nowadays, more than million tons of wastes have been being produced...
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Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ave been being produced which from home everyday and some people claim that not enough o...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun waste seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many wastes'.
Suggestion: Many wastes
...ate a litter and make it to have value. Many waste, paper box or steel from home can sale ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73426573427 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43977786191 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562937062937 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6483962751 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334153644426 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109779447853 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712840861551 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165247384612 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705201947103 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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