In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extent do you agree or disagree
Technological and scientific progress had been dramatically transformed and affecting variance and quality of meals we can buy. Most people believe that the food options and qualities are the result of the technological improvement. Meanwhile, those who opposed to that say it may be dangerous. Personally, I think industrial development had significantly changed people’s demand either in quality or quantity of food. Unfortunately, this rapid transformation does not have specific health regulation, which I believe it can be a problem for uncommunicable disease prevention in today society.
For many decades, machine technology has been utilized by industrial companies to produce a massive and a good quality of food. Through this machine advancement, frozen and fast food was then made and distributed in a larger scale to fulfil people needs. In response to customer satisfaction, the plenty of food options and quality of products are continually enhanced and then offered by the business sector to increase company’s income.
Unfortunately, there is no strict regulation to prevent people suffer from uncommunicable diseases. Recent survey shows that fast food is the major cause of stroke, cancer and heart disease prevalence in young group. Sugar and fat are generally found as a main material of frozen and processing meals where World Health Organization previously declared that these two materials were harmful for human-being. To reduce uncommunicable diseases prevalence, Government should implement high tax regulation to the companies who distribute unhealthy food.
In conclusion, I believe that technological advancement could address customer satisfaction in terms of food options and quality of products. However, main material of frozen and fast meals may potentially create health problem. If Government could start high tax regulation to the companies, uncommunicable diseases prevalence will be declined.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82867132867 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32774014418 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5069397207 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197439119698 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674652896175 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355629623648 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121557246374 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135758809733 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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