Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Day-by-day, garbage becomes a huge problem that every country has to face. However, one of the issue in recycling waste is to collect enough from homes. I think that since the government deploys some legal rules to force people to follow it, the mentioned problem will be solved.
First, the strong law will improve the consciousness of citizens who are increasing rapidly in the big city that leads to a large amount of waste from them. They certainly know that if breaking the law, they will receive a punishment. By following it every day, they will gradually develop a habit in classifying garbage. For example, in Taiwan where has the best environment in the world, the government requires the residents classify recycling waste and throw it out to other garbage truck. it always has a worker check it one more time before they say goodbye to the garbage. If they do it wrong, they will get fine money.
Second, the band requirement from duty person should let people understand that garbage classification will bring an advantage for them. People will obey the requirement and they will be happier and more efficiency. For instance, in Taiwan, there are many ATM garbage machines where people can deposit recycling wastes and receive money for paying public transportation.
In condition, the method to band a requirement is very important. While people follow a good and legal law, we can reduce the amount of garbage and improve the environment. Hence, there are two perspectives need to solve well at the same time: government management and consciousness of citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64934934914 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7709401677 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25807740582 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873237613625 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482640740608 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152262629281 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407851525563 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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