Some people claim that what people eat in many Western countries is unhealthy and their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet. What are your opinions on this?
It is undeniable that foodstuffs play a vital role in our lives and have a strong influence on people’s health. There is an opinion, that residents of some western countries eat unhealthy food, so their diet is getting worse. Personally, I agree with this statement and feel this way for two reasons that I’m going to explore in the following essay.
Firstly, one should note here that junk food became popular for the very first time in American countries. At that moment it was a great invention, so people were able to eat many different kinds of hamburgers, crisps and carbonated drinks. There is no doubt, that it was very convenient and even nowadays it is a major factor why all my friends decide to visit a fast-food restaurant. However, eating this type of food regularly leads to illnesses such as obesity. It is a great problem for some regions on our planet, because people get used to eat tasty hamburgers instead of cooking at home. Consequently, the great majority of the US residents suffer from extra weight which makes working and living very difficult for them.
Secondly, I believe that this problem can be solved by changing people’s diets. The great example of healthy food can be found in coastal countries such as Japan and South Korea. In these places people eat fish, which is the ingredient of most their meals, so it allows them to be in good body condition. The other example can be found in southern parts of my country. Dwellers there have their own tradition food that made of rice, vegetables and some amount of meat. In fact, this kind of food is extremely popular among residents of Russia because it is tasty with nice flavor.
To draw the conclusion, I think that people who like to east fast-food should change their preferences in order to be healthy, and cook at home using recipes from Asian countries and southern regions of Russia.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in fact, kind of, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83486238532 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56165452384 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584097859327 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1392842756 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266132839965 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845293877875 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995135864814 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170177041647 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662732029218 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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