In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society?
There is no doubt that social status and respect play an important role in people’s life. However, in some areas nowadays citizens have a lack of respect to seniors. Personally, I think that this behaviour has some underlying reasons and it can lead to several serious problems in society, so I will explore these aspects in the following essay.
Firstly, the technical development can be one of the main reasons. In fact, children are mad about new computers and mobile phones, so they use it almost everywhere. They spend their free time chatting with friends and reading articles from unreliable sources. Consequently, these kids are sure that they know everything and it is unnecessary to listen to an unsolisited advice from old people. The second problem occurs in families when parents do not pay much attention on their kids. Basically, without strong bounds between parents and children it is impossible to bring up a noble and a reasonable person. As a result, such people take bad habits and bad ways of behaviour that transform into lack of respect.
After a while these reasons lead to social problems. The first problem can be defined as a gap between young generations and old people. It means that for inhabitants it would be much harder to communicate and interact, because individuals would have different views and beliefs. Therefore, teenagers wouldn’t give a sit in the public transport for others, which is a common situation in my city. The other problem relates to the health of seniors. It is undeniable that good and friendly environment makes people feel better, so without help, support and respect from the side life expectancy will significantly reduce.
To draw the conclusion, I am sure that some contemporary reasons contribute to this problem, which later lead to social problems, that I described in my essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, i think, in fact, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81868381113 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9279046555 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156299627221 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435808725431 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331596722271 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965915892355 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02057586195 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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