Some people like different friends. Others like similar friends. Compare the advantages of these two? Kinds of friends which kind of friend do you prefer?
People meet different persons during their period of life. Generally, most of a person’s friends were found in his young age. Some of people like to have many friends and hangout with them. However, some others tend to limit their circle of friends to few numbers of persons who have close bonding with that person. Each of these attitudes has their advantages and disadvantages.
Choosing to have a large number of friends which always be around you may help you to learn many experiences. It also can provide you with variety of ideas that assist you to thrive during your life.In addition; it would be beneficial when you face a disaster or trouble. Since, there will be a lot of folks to help you go through it. Mainly, a large number of friends with different opinions can help you make better decisions in group work activities.
In the other hand, normally, it may have some disadvantages too. It can harm your self-confidence since, so many people may judge you without any consideration. Also, they will take most of your day and even night routinely. This would cause some serious issues in your future life consequently. Trusting is another matter which affects most of the relationships. Different friends become your friend with different intentions, as you enlarge the circle of your friends your trust can decrease about some of them, as they may tell you something that you do not like and conclude it as a misleading. An important factor that should not be missed is satisfaction. As your number of friends grow it will be difficult to satisfy them because different persons with different manners have certainly different expectations from you as a friend. If you choose to have many friends you must accept the fact that your secrets may be so much more in danger. Therefore, if you have many hidden thing in your life it would be better to have less friends.
In conclusion, friendship and making friends is so much crucial especially for young people. Each of these theories have their advantages and disadvantages. But I believe that having a few close similar friends can benefit and assist a person far better in his life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the people') or simply say ''Some people''.
Suggestion: Some of the people; Some people
...;s friends were found in his young age. Some of people like to have many friends and hangout w...
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Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...s tend to limit their circle of friends to few numbers of persons who have close b...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... and disadvantages. Choosing to have a large number of friends which always be around you may ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...t assist you to thrive during your life.In addition; it would be beneficial when y...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ssist you to thrive during your life.In addition; it would be beneficial when you face a...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al when you face a disaster or trouble. Since, there will be a lot of folks to help y...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...olks to help you go through it. Mainly, a large number of friends with different opinions can hel...
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Line 5, column 586, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...that you do not like and conclude it as a misleading. An important factor that should not be...
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Line 5, column 840, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rent expectations from you as a friend. If you choose to have many friends you mus...
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Line 5, column 1030, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun friends is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...in your life it would be better to have less friends. In conclusion, friendship a...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...assist a person far better in his life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8722826087 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69134116845 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508152173913 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0891517925 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278247754441 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852823639726 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628302941178 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171140894729 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460080019044 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.