Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other type of job should be highly paid?
It is usually said that people who work in the entertainment industry such as film stars, musicians or sports stars are being paid too much money. This essay will shed light on the reason why I feel they are overpaid and then I am going to describe other occupations which should receive higher salaries.
There are two reasons for me to think that the salaries paid for entertainers are too high. Firstly, the incomes of entertainers are not proportional to what they contribute to society. For example, just by a single night on the stage, Taylor Swift can make hundreds of thousands of dollars, an amount of money that many people cannot have despite of their much effort all lives. In addition, if we lay the incomes of entertainers in comparison with other important realms like education or science, then the entertainers’ salaries will be too high even though their contributions to society is not equal to education or science.
There are numerous of other occupations that need receiving better and higher amount of money. For example, since technology is capable in controlling and enhancing the world’s innovation, programmers or developers should be rewarded more. In term of improving educational standards, teachers should receive higher salaries in order to reward their meaningful contributions to the society, since they play an important role in enhancing people’s intellectual standards.
In conclusion, entertainers do not show anything better than people in other occupations. As a result, I suggest the salaries paid for them should be reduced and labors in other realms should be rewarded appropriately for what they contribute to the society
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27881040892 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06483426127 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57249070632 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.298140091 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.090909091 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307921583723 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121179476543 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112865696105 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204557751585 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109834546464 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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