The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.
Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.
The two given charts illustrate the amounts of male and female workers of year 1975 and 1995 in different employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.
As can be seen from the graph, in most of the sectors, the numbers of male employees were superior than the female ones. In 1975, the amounts of male workers were higher than the female ones in all of the six given sectors.
In 1975, the public sector (non – defence) accounted for the biggest number of workers – nearly 1300, followed by wholesale and retail trade and manufacturing which were 1220 and 890 workers respectively. In the public sector, male employees accounted for over 800 people, while the female was just about 620, which was over 200 people fewer than the male.
In 1995, the numbers of female workers in most of the sectors experienced significant rises. In some sectors such as communication and wholesale and retail trade, the amounts of female employees even rose over the male ones. Female employees’ number in communication sector was much higher than the male one – nearly 700 compared with 250. In the sector of wholesale and retail trade, female workers’ number peaked at 800, while male was 100 people fewer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 100, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...numbers of male employees were superior than the female ones. In 1975, the amounts o...
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Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ers were higher than the female ones in all of the six given sectors. In 1975, the publi...
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Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...were 1220 and 890 workers respectively. In the public sector, male employees accou...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s over 200 people fewer than the male. In 1995, the numbers of female workers in ...
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Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... sectors experienced significant rises. In some sectors such as communication and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92195121951 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57112506825 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473170731707 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0104149718 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309004098224 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158395398384 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671028336434 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218863663134 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615537906516 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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