Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Many of people say that public figures such as movie stars, rappers and vloggers are getting too much money than people that should be paid higher. This essay strongly agrees with people who feel like that and will discuss other jobs have to be paid much more.
First of all, reason why the public figures should not be paid too much is most of them are fake personalities that are promoted by huge companies. By doing this companies aim to make so much money on those figures. For example, recently a rapper called Lil Pump have promoted by Atlantic records, which is the biggest recording company in the world, at first this rapper made a garbage song about himself then millions of people watched his music video just for making fun of him. However, millions of viewers attracted Atlantic records attention, so Atlantic records signed him for 10 million dollars after that in order to remain the same number of viewers, recording company provided him lyrics and beats to record. Now he is making more money than most of the people by doing nothing. Therefore, those people who are not even working should not be paid well.
In my opinion, people that deserve more money than public figures are teachers since they actually serve to the world and try to make the world better place by teaching lessons to the people. Also, they gave their years because there are so many process such as complicated exams that have to be taken and spending a lot of money to the books also taking special courses for communication with students. These are all hard process have to be going through by our teachers. Therefore, they have to be paid much more than those public figures have no skill or talent.
In the light of the given information, it is clear that some people that have no talent overpaid by doing nothing and instead of giving so much money to these public figures, people like teachers should be paid higher since they are the ones that design our futures by giving education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun process seems to be countable; consider using: 'many processes'.
Suggestion: many processes
...y gave their years because there are so many process such as complicated exams that have to ...
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Line 10, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...design our futures by giving education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, so, then, therefore, well, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72492836676 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19366378912 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527220630372 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2605313321 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.846153846 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272734328924 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11574096814 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858278225427 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199459143152 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103473622865 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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