Some people feel that media like the press television and internet should be more controlled other believe if anything that control should be loose and to give people access to information where do you stand on this issue
Technology is opening new ways of modern life style. Some people are believing that new platform's like press, television, and internet should be more controlled on the other part of society believing that the controls should be loosened to give people. In my perspective media platforms must controlled by administrators. By the control of government on media leads to provide truthful and proper news to society. Day by day, as a results of great development, utilization of television, smart phone has increased in every country all over the world. Mass media communications like press, social media, and electronic media are working in extreme condition to cover news updates. But at the same time, some unidentified source is provoking fake news with the collaboration of some social media and electronic media platforms. False news creators are using freedom of expiration and right to information as mask and leads to creation of law and order problems in society. As I mentioned before social media and electronic media like news channels are playing a key role in spreading false news towards society because of their business comfortability's. To illustrate this scenario, I will take Kashmir issue which was happened recently in India as an example. Wrong news came out in social media like Kashmir surrounded places were attacked by terrorists and on the other hand news channels had spread the false news. So, government should control media. Authority's must create some new rules and regulation to implement on social media and lectronic media. However, freedom of expiration, right to information and law and order are the main pillars of administration. Worthless false news are creating great problematic impact on authority's to administrate. Especially countries which fallows democratic constitution are facing hedge trebles. To eradicate these type of trebles, ministry should implement terrible incentives and instructions on media. For instance, in a recent survey of India today says 50 % of people are believing false news in the largest democratic country like India. I conclude that authority's should make new rules to control media to stop provoking false news on society
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a result; results
... proper news to society. Day by day, as a results of great development, utilization of te...
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...rvey of India today says 50 % of people are believing false news in the largest democratic co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34682080925 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95640154744 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534682080925 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3787470496 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3684210526 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280534308193 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906670482337 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11786092843 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280534308193 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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