Some people find history a fascinating subject. Others say it is dull and has no value in modern life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The science of the past can sometimes be a controversial issue for people. While a group of them advocate that history is a glomarous field of a science, another group is settelled on the opposite side; they find history as a unneccessary topic to learn. This essay will discuss both of views and reach a conclusion at the end.
On the one hand, learning and teaching our past is so important to get some points from past experiences of ancestors and behave wisely in the future. In other words, people learn from their mistakes and are willingness to not repeat it in the future, so human’s history is with full of these mistakes and lessons. For example, several serious conflicts in the last century has been solved between Soviet Russia and America peacefully because both sides had experienced the result of WWII and nobody did not eager to battle again. Hence, people can learn from history and may do plausible choices.
On the other hand, burden of learning many unneccessary information from past may exhaust the new generation which eventually decrease their hope and enthusiasm about coming years. To put it simply, knowing about history could be boring for youngsters and it may intercept their learning process. A case in this point, learning about a historical surgery for a doctor does not help the improvement of any operational skill because new techniques on this surgery has become updated so far and become more flawless everyday. Therefore, insisting about history may be redundant and overload people’s minds.
To conclude, although some people find history as boring and invaluable, a groups of people believe that it is a precious subject. In my opinion, everybody should learn the history and jot down some lessons from past to enlighten their futures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06397306397 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70488378421 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9126778692 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161550462247 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650832477381 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573506881003 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116089653214 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622934503042 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.