Some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today’s world, there are those who pay great attention to localized issues and events whilst other people argue that getting world news is more significant. From my perspective, both viewpoints deserve thorough scrutiny.
The reason why coverage of domestic news matters is understandable. It is true that people should be aware of the happenings around them so that they could be more well-prepared to deal with the upcoming events. If fact, local and national news often provide its audience with a hoard of knowledge and information regarding regional economy, traffic, weather patterns and different aspects of life. People would in turn know what to do and not to do to avoid unexpected troubles. For instance, the reports on road works or traffic accidents would prove to be useful for the locals as they can choose another route to their destination. This could save them a great deal of time, thereby making their daily lives less stressful.
The role of international coverage, however, should not be neglected. In the globalized era, having access to foreign news is crucial since it can help people broaden their mind and perspective, turning them into more informed individuals. In other words, their knowledge about globally economic, cultural, political and social values of countries overseas might be substantially enriched. This means that taking into account the status quo and existing issues of different parts of the world may enable people to evade conflicts and cultural shock if they migrate to these areas. What is more, through international news coverage about moguls or developed countries, people can follow similar path to success and avoid a dead-end. For instance, during the outbreak of coronavirus pandemic, government officials could learn about the ways other nations did to halt the infection of virus. There is no denying that a smart and sustained approach could prevent financial and human loss for their realms.
In sum, for the reasons mentioned above, I would contend that domestic and global news are important in equal measures. Embracing both types of coverage would therefore help people perfect their understanding of the surroundings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, for instance, in other words, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30459770115 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74720458697 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8988117525 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.588235294 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26204765115 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760423291285 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423996551438 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154112765287 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245543428339 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.