Some people say that government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about how government should use their national budget. While there are those who maintain that money should be channeled to take care of the aged population, others are of the opinion that the state should invest in education of young generation. Both positions have their own merits and deserve thorough scrutiny.
There are numerous reasons why public money should be allocated to healthcare for the senior citizens, one of which is the increased longevity and improved well-being of the elderly. This means that when older people are able to access to better medical care, they would have better physical and mental health, which would in turn reduce the government subsidy in treatment and caregiving. It should also be noted that older people often have much spare time, so they can not only help look after their grandchildren but can also participate in voluntary work to support the community. For these reasons, it is justifiable that they deserve government expenditure.
The sponsorship for youngsters’ education, however, should be not overlooked. It is true that out of many other sectors, education is a top priority, and it serves as a sound foundation for people to become productive members of the society. In fact, an informed individual would hardly meet difficulties finding an employment and maintaining a regular income, the major contributing factors to national economic growth. What is more, education plays a pivotal role in regulating the youth’s behavior, potentially turning them into an educated with a high moral standing. In other words, the juveniles might be more responsible for their acts and be less likely to engage in criminal activities. Accordingly, the federal investment in education sector for young people is a long-term development strategy.
In sum, for the reasons mentioned above, I would contend that equal importance should be placed on medical care for the oldies and education for adolescents. This would therefore bring the most promising results for the progression of a nation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, in other words, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31402439024 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84641663694 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600609756098 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8857900518 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295161379048 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949634833315 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069231225641 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180974851267 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919487840519 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.