Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford.
What are the reasons for this behaviour?
What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
Some people tend to owe money from others to satisfy their desire to buy things which are even useless and too expensive for them to buy. This essay will discuss the reasons why these people do this action and find some solutions to stop it.
Obviously, being addicted to shopping, being gullible and bad at managing finances are three main reasons for buying things which are not necessary and affordable. There are lots of shopaholic people who always want to buy anything they want without considering its price and usages. For example, my friend can’t stand buying things such as toothbrushes, pens, pencases, clothes, cosmetics whenever she is interested in it even if she has many at home. Besides, many people are too gullible in advertisements about the usefulness of the products, which pushes their desire to own them so that they quickly decide to buy these no matter how expensive they are. Moreover, many people, especially the youth who lack experience in managing money, can easily be in debt since they do not either check their money regularly or take into account their actual needs.
Therefore, being educated about managing finances is necessary, especially for the younger generation so that they can manage their money properly when they are independent from their parents. In addition, people should consider carefully about the price and usefulness of the products that are advertised on televisions, on networking sites or even in reality. Besides, asking for references and advice from friends, family members, and so on before buying things is a good idea to prevent people from buying useless or unaffordable things.
In conclusion, people who are addicted to shopping, guidible and can not manage their money, are likely to be in debt due to shopping. To limite this action, joining a managing finances class, thinking more carefully and asking others for their advice are efficient methods.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14012738854 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5823214581 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544585987261 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.2009615236 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318522774048 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122269303166 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046964163471 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212544155389 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413525889396 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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