Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.
What are the reasons for this behaviour?
What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
In the era of globalization, the human’s perception of money has changed throughout the history. Therefore, living in highlight is a new kind of lifestyle that many people nowadays are willing to be in debt. However, I believe there are some explanations for this issue by digging into explore the cause of their behaviour. Simultaneously, this problem can be tackled with poached mitigation strategies put forward by the government.
There are several rationales for the people’s thought on buying things that may not necessary to get into debt. The most considerable reason is that denizens in general and youngsters in particular are influenced by the impact of social media. This reason can be explained by the fact that influencers from many social applications use their posts indicated a new lavish lifestyle to hypotized people who follow them, and to advertise their products. As a result, people are become longing for exquisitive items after watching those posts, and consent for being owned money to purchase them. Another compelling exposition shows that people eagering to buy products which is prohibitively exorbitant for them and even though useless is to build up their imagine of themselves to the other. This can be perfectly exemplified by the latest research related to the purpose of buying things that is not necessity and impossible to afford. The final result shows that 90% of people decided to buy for burnishing their profiles.
However, above these reasons, solutions for this issue can be done after many discussions. Firstly, it is crucial for the government to start increasing interest rate in order to alleviating the illegal debt. Secondly, people from distinct religions, communities, cultures should learn how to husband the money by avoiding hook on social media. This will contribute to changing people awareness and attitude on living appropriately in convinced ways. For instance, if all citizens around the world determinate to anti social network services, the outcome of being debt for purchasing inapproriated things will significantly mitigate.
In conclusion, this phenomenon can be explained by some justifiable reasons However, solutions can be taken to resolve this issue in overall. In the near future, it is predicted that there will be only ¼ in proportion of people affected by the loans from buying unnecessary and expensive items.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36507936508 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95317260062 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6452076825 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425374114362 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128294082736 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735731107962 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270060493813 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429529404856 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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