Some people that government should make investment in building public libraries in every town while other thinks it's a waste of money because we have assess to information via internet discuss both views and give your opinion
As the popularity of the internet is growing day by day, many people hold the opinion that there is no point keeping the library facility in every city. By the contrast, other people have conflicting views and as per them, the regime should spend some budget in building the libraries. While, to some extent I also agree on the later viewpoint.
To commence with, there are multifarious reasons, why many people hold the opinion that the state government should not spend the amount in maintaining the public library. Firstly, as per them most of the information, which are available in the books is easily accessible using the internet. Moreover, if a city has more libraries, then the overall maintenance cost would be quite high, which would be a bit difficult for the regime of incipient countries to afford. maintenance cost such as paying a salary to the librarian, cleaning staffs and people helping and keeping the records of the books.
On the contrary, other people think that library has its own importance, because of the various reasons. First and foremost, there are many people such as people of the older generations, still prefer to read the information either through books or in the magazines. As per them reading on the computer using the internet is not convenient and it can lead to the several health issues, such as pain in the eyes, in addition to severe back pain and the neck pain. These predicaments are very common, especially in the younger generations as they spend most of their leisure time sitting in front of the computer. Furthermore, since the olden days the library has been considered, as an essential place for quiet and silent reading. Consequently, students prefer to study in the library during their exams for better concentration.
To recapitulate, in my viewpoint, even though, usage of the internet is growing day by day; we still require a place like a library for better concentration in the studies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Maintenance
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, in addition, such as, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96048632219 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74043470168 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55623100304 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4732581083 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206942757651 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680679890248 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612705165696 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122823566342 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713540429869 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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