Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared to an apartment?
Having a place to live is great. As it is one of our basic needs. Still, there are plenty of people who argue that which one is best- a house or an apartment. According to my perception, both have their own pros and cons. This essay will scrutinize the both virtues and will suggest a sophisticated solution for this issue.
To embark with, A house provides us more privacy than an apartment so that one can live according to his wishes. However, a house is more spacious. Children can play any type of game whether it is indoor, outdoor and recreational activity. For instance, Individuals can organize the parties at their home if they are sizeable enough. What is more, owners can renovate the house at any time which is not possible in an apartment because of specific rules and regulations.
On the flip side, Although houses are unaffordable by many. Hiring a flat is an everyone's cup of tea. It is not possible for the individuals who earn a little, to buy a house. To epitomize, in London civilians have to pay a lot of amount as a tax who owns a house. So, a penthouse is preferable. Apart from this, it gives us a feeling of security as apartments are under the surveillance of security guards. One can easily move here and there. Thus, it has certain merits too.
Hammering the last nail of this topic, it is an undeniable fact that a flat has numerous advantages. Despite that fact, merits of a house outweigh an apartment. Living in a house adds more happiness in the life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of amounts'.
Suggestion: a lot of amounts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, thus, apart from, for instance, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56133828996 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68076912976 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 31.957312798 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.4285714286 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8095238095 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2380952381 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285142396725 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765083511512 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087325687429 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169356729163 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651794055871 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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