Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantage of living in a house compared to living in an apartment
There is no doubt that owning a residential place is a very important aspect in a person’s life. While few believe that, living in a house is a better choice, others argue that living in an apartment has more benefits than drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and explain my support for the latter view with relevant examples.
On the one hand, building a house is not only a necessity but a dream for many people. This is because, people can plan the construction according to requirements and necessity. For example, children love to play in their home- garden thus having great family time together. The housemaker can have her own kitchen- garden to grow fresh vegetables of her choice. In contrast, apartments are much more compact and easy to manage by the help of building management system. As a result, the residents are not worried about daily issues of electricity, fuel and water supply.
On the other hand, staying in an apartment is safe and more cost effective. The reason for this is, the constant surveillance and one point entry system in apartments. For instance, no person can enter without identification at the guard manned reception and an affirmation from the apartment resident. Hence, people feel safe and secured by this protocol. In contrast, houses have more privacy with huge spaces to celebrate festivals and throw parties. As a result, more family gatherings can be enjoyed by people living in their own lavish houses.
In the end, living in an apartment or a house is one’s own preference and financial constraint. Happiness has nothing to do with the size or location of the place.
In conclusion, while living in a house has its own benefits, in my opinion, apartments have more advantages for a person than disadvantages.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93708609272 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82269376753 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9607534333 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.8333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338266603818 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977099707653 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130582155086 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213851590887 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904708750112 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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