In a technologically developed society, with improved media platforms, advertisements do not just play the role of inferring people about a product, but also, have many other means. The nature and style of advertisements and their influence on society has to be discussed in detail.
Centuries ago, advertisements or announcements were given to people along with drum beats. The advertisements which we have now are also do the same purpose of passing information to people. The advancements in technology brought different medias into the picture. Every media from newspaper to a mobile phone carry advertisements. For instance, the competition in trade is increased so much that, we have multiple brands for every product. This competition make them to develop creative ideas and bring them to the market. The advertisements now a days, play the role of familiarising the existing products and introducing new products, which open us a way to compare and decide.
Most of the traders are interested in their business and they find advertisements as a route to improve their market. Therefore, most of the advertisements which we see now try to exaggerate the real product with tricks, which is actually equivalent to fooling the audience. This may lead to the purchase of products with lesser quality. There is another strategy which the companies often use, but, which needs to be protested, is making misbeliefs in their customers. Some advertisements make people to think that, not having the particular product is a shame. Thus, they are forced to buy things which they do not need.
Though advertisements can be source of giving information about new products, now a days, they are encouraging us to buy unnecessary things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...s. The advertisements which we have now are also do the same purpose of passing inf...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...vertisements which we have now are also do the same purpose of passing information...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... them to the market. The advertisements now a days, play the role of familiarising the exi...
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Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...m to the market. The advertisements now a days, play the role of familiarising the exi...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot need. Though advertisements can be source of giving information about new p...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... giving information about new products, now a days, they are encouraging us to buy unneces...
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Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ing information about new products, now a days, they are encouraging us to buy unneces...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23655913978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18798617747 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8198072824 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351400946712 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103795486668 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700629753277 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210701699535 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03175323179 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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