There is an argue between people people who believe that adds are the best instrument to convince individuals purchasing particular goods, while others thinks that advertasing has already become an indisputable part of our live. This essay discusses both arguments and then I will give my own perspective.
It is clear that the very first mechanism the company use for introducing their novations is addvertising. Moreover, it goes without saying people could not know about products without adds and marketing strategies, which used by business. As well as this, a number of companies use psychological tricks in order to convince or even forced humans to buy. In adition to this, brand's profit significantly depends on adds, thus they try to create a high quality adds by introducing celebreties or athlets. Furthermore, the main target of modern companies is children. For instance, the hollywood's films 90 percent income is coming from cartoons and movies, which created for yongstress. Hence, industry of advertising is driving to this direction.
However, there is an idea that adds are not so exellent at forcing a person to go to shop and buy their items. The main argument of this notion is that there are a great deal of adds on TV, on the streets, on the posters and on the social media, thus people even have not pay attention any more. As well as this, 21 century made easy to get rid of adds from everywhere by installing programs on your TV or smartphone. In adition, many researches showed, that people's brain has already accustomed to common advertising and does not react as decades ago, when advertising was something new. For example, my sister, 11 years old, never watches adds on her phone, instead she skips them and continue consumes a content.
From my point view, the industry of making adds is so huge and the amount of advertisments are ancountable that peole can not be influenced by them to purchase items without need.
In conclusion, there are people who believe that advertising is great power, that capable of force people to do something, but others do not think so, they think that today's individual can no be affected by this kind of tricks, broadcasted by TV or social media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76922773029 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597333333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4723266898 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.9375 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223597784433 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062296493308 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575409402603 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125261008437 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502121596917 0.056905535591 88% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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