Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Advertising has become increasingly popular from the last few decades. Many people have the believe that marketing products have been succeeded immensely in making us purchase things. Others however, think that it has become very ordinary and no attention is given by us. This essay will discuss why paying no attentiveness has its reasons but why it has become so successful in convincing us is ultimately superior.
advertising has become so ordinary that it can be seen everywhere and people no longer show interest in them. A person watching videos on youtube can be interrupted by any kind of ad campaigns and skip them without paying attention. As an example, people have started to use adblock extension in their browsers to stop seeing ads while watching youtube videos. Being able to stop ads from videos shows why it has become so common and inattentive.
On the other hand, not everyone needs to skip ads and seeing them can be very intriguing. Many people prefer to buy new things all the time and they do so by looking at different kinds of commercials. For example, many children in Pakistan are asking for drones from their parents because they have seen it on the internet through ads. As a result, making a person to purchase their item through marketing promotion is exceptionally successful.
In conclusion, purchasing items by being persuasive from commercials is very successful according to some people. other people pay no attention and believe advertising is very common. In my opinion, advertising will remain forever on top of the game in convincing us to buy things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03383458647 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79695458378 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.3899249388 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.2666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282387092326 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100949198988 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946384402472 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18208410684 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840926749649 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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