Views on whether advertisements can have an impact on people's lives or not are different. While some people argue that advertising is too common to draw the public's attention, I agree with the idea that advertisements make a great contribution to people's consumption.
The arguement in favour of the idea that people are no longer attracted by advertising materials may be reasonable and understandable when considering customers' ever-rising awareness of advertising. Nowadays, bombarded with all types of advertising information, people gradually cultivate their own judgement and are no longer driven to consumption by exaggerated advertisements. Consequently, people prefer paying for the old brands that they are familiar with rather than purchasing new emerging products. Because it is believed that the old-brand items are more reliable. It, therefore seems that advertisements can no longer persuade consumers to make a purchase.
Nevertheless, although advertisements may have a small impact on some consumers, I believe that most people are influenced by persuasive advertisements. Fisrtly, advertising materials play a vital role in providing information, through which people can learn quickly about the products. For example, when buying something, some people tend to compare the advertising promotions of different brands so that they can know clearly which brand is more appropriate for them. Secondly, advertising industries are making their information more attractive, catering to audiences' requirements and changing people's consumer habits. Finally, some new forms of advertisements, like advertising using streaming media, also make a difference.
In conclusion, although people's awareness and judgement about advertisements have improved, advertising information still plays a crucial role in changing people's consuming habits for a variety of reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...t advertising is too common to draw the publics attention, I agree with the idea that a...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... than purchasing new emerging products. Because it is believed that the old-brand items...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41408883054 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1731069042 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.153846154 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314147214225 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1219807539 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526814094814 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21089628016 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356355449255 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.52 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.