Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today’s industrialized world, advertising is so popular that one may come across it almost anywhere in everyday life. Some people think that advertising is nothing but a simple everyday thing whereas, in my opinion, I believe that advertising is a key reason for attracting people to the products.
On the one hand, some people indeed think that adverts are no longer a tempting factor to buy a product due to its usual content. Undeniably, there are adverts almost everywhere such as, social media, street posters, and especially on the Internet, which sometimes made people feel annoyed with its poorly organized structure. Even some people know what involves in a typical advert, which shows the main reason why adverts nowadays are being neglected.
On the other hand, in today’s fast-changing business world, no one can deny that advertising is one of the optimal ways of reaching customers by introducing a product’s detailed background. I, personally, agree with this idea for some reasons. First of all, with the help of advertising newly founded businesses can easily introduce their products to the market, with giving detailed information on them so customers can realize what they are buying. Another possible reason why advertising is necessary for the business is probably the way it can convince customers with its creative and attractive look. People are often in favor of buying products that appeal to them not only with products’ price but also with their appearance.
In conclusion, advertising has already turned into an everyday thing that it no longer can draw people’s attention to itself, however, I believe this is not always the case since advertising is the only reason to inform customers about products’ background details with appealing covers on them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, whereas, even so, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28472222222 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83207352166 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4499656502 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.363636364 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237011457236 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984331969592 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728548056247 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163611813111 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536251523123 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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