Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that whether advertising is a huge success has a crucial impact on persuading people to purchase products or not. I personally suppose that advertisement is truly a progression in humankind and has been the key factor to help accelerate the products’ consumption.
Firstly, there are sayings about the success of advertising in several aspects, particularly marketing. Advertisement has been noticed by its visualized ability since its inception. People are simply attracted by graphics or enthralling images, thus, advertising can satisfy their eyes thanks to the progression of virtual technology. Furthermore, even though the products are not prominent, they may be overrated through the magic of advertisements. As a result, those who feel curious and interested in the advertised campaigns are more likely to purchase the products. For instance, some skincare products are not as effective as they are said in the advertisements, but many still order them because they are impressed by the advertisements they have seen.
Secondly, regarding the failure of advertising, some believe that this way of marketing is not indeed effective aforementioned. Many people suppose that as the advertising industry expands, they become tedious and people no longer feel excited about them. It is true that some companies are being abused by using advertisements, as it may cause reverse effects. Seeing a bunch of repeated advertisements every day makes people feel annoyed and want to avoid them. Hence, people are likely to have the habit of ignoring advertisements. Take an example, in case someone is in their mood to enjoy their film, but the advertisement suddenly appears and causes disruption several times, that person may have the psychological resistance to advertising.
To conclude, there are pervasive arguments around advertisement since its advent. However, my firm conviction is that advertising brings lots of benefits to society and is a dispensable assistant in business or recreation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for instance, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54516129032 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26241963792 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.102423691 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222579224662 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748111952352 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528568717758 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133951746003 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337846495548 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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