Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Noise is a signal of jubilance to some people, but a great source of annoyance to others. It leads to two sides of arguments that noise should be under control, while the other side opposes that idea. From my perspective, I will discuss both sides as well as give my own ideas about this issue.
On the one hand, admittedly, a considerable amount of noise can hurt our auditory sensations. For example, according to confirmed research on the audible spectrum, human ears can handle noise levels ranging from 0 db to 140 db, but the most comfortable limit is just from 0 db to roughly 50-60 db. If our ears have to work beyond their limits, they will be properly damaged. In addition, human emotions change depending on how loud the sound can be. The more peaceful the sound is, the more soothed they become, and vice versa. Obviously, everybody needs a private zone to calm their feelings and relax, but loud noises can disturb our emotions.
On the other hand, it is inevitable that human beings are emotional creatures, so expressing emotions is one of their natural instincts. It is nothing wrong to scream and shout in order to celebrate special occasions, such as a scored goal or a jackpot. Therefore, it would be a great frustration if feelings could not be vented. For example, people would like to express their joy and excitement by screaming and shouting when their favorite soccer team scores a goal. However, it would change to annoyance, then sadness if they weren't allowed to have fun that way due to noise control laws.
All things considered, I would prefer to be on the side of keeping the amount of sound under control rather than making it loud and free since I love to stay in a peaceful space. Although noise may mean fun to some people, it should be moderated in order not to violate others' private zones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67283950617 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50124949723 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9267918829 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2610402309 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761167173781 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493236452497 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15596528733 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522170987353 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.