Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Health is always the top concern of many people. It is said that to improve public health, the best way is playing different kinds of sports. Nevertheless, others argue that other solutions should be made because of little effect of sports on public health.
On the one hand, the number of good sports facilities give us many benefits. First of all, we will feel much healthier due to the fact that headache, backache or tiredness will disappear gradually by the time we practice. The second is that, playing sports can mitigate the possibility of blood pressure and hear-related diseases. Moreover, that sports are practiced occasionally helps us become happier, more vivacious and active,resulting in working efficiently.
On the other hand, playing sports is not enough for people to stay healthy but needs other ways. For example, it is very important for us to make a reasonable diet like eating a lot of vegetables, restricting to eat meat and drinking about 4 litres water everyday. Therefore, it will make it easy for us to keep fit and avoid intestinal disease or obesity. Furthermore, having regulations between work and daily life is also vital to improve health. Everybody should keep the spirit of comfort, evade feeling stressed and angry, afraid of something. This has a negative impact on not only our health but also or work as well as relationships with people, friends, families...v...v.
In conclusion, playing sports and some other ways are really necessary for us to develop public health because each way has its own advantages. However, in my opinion, we should follow both two ways to make our health better and better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 431, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , resulting
...ecome happier, more vivacious and active,resulting in working efficiently. On the other ...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... meat and drinking about 4 litres water everyday. Therefore, it will make it easy for us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04395604396 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84388772746 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5609351829 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.8 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7333333333 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26627556402 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867968210267 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818799330653 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174765227591 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104134740704 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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