Some people say that books will lose importance as a source of information and entertainment. do you agree or disagree?
With the advancement of modern technology, it seems that traditional books will find it extremely challenging to compete with other sources of information and entertainment on the internet. Nevertheless, from my perspective, I wholeheartedly believe that books definitely still play an indispensable part of people’s lives.
At the outset, there is no denying that despite of the robust growth of plethora of information, books have always equipped people with the most valuable knowledge which has been thoroughly examined when published. Unlike many fake and low quality news and websites making individuals lose their stance, up-to-date books provide people all kinds of meticulously edited information in a particular field, which helps the readers find it more useful and easier to do a research on a specific subjects. Furthermore, it is apparent that nowadays there is an increase in the self help books and biography of some of the most influential people which can motivate individuals, make them feel empowered and lead them to the right path.
Apart from that, fictional books or comic books still play a vital part in people’s lives for being an incredible means of entertainment. People often find it difficult to put down these books when they lure the readers into a completely different world, make them forget the reality and hide themselves in their own space. In all likelihood, books will not only entertain them but also help them to broaden their horizons, and change their perspectives.
Last but not least, much as many surveys have shown that fewer people read books, books are still considered as the most priceless treasure of individuals. For the past few years, there has been a significant rise in the number of adolescents and young adults opting for reading a book in preference to surfing the net. In addition to that, sales of online books store have gone exponentially, bringing a huge profit for the economy, which clearly imply that more and more people acknowledge the vitality of books in their life.
To recapitulate, I strongly disagree with the motion that books can not survive in this digital age.
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...orizons, and change their perspectives. Last but not least, much as many surveys...
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... not survive in this digital age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23209169054 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93660071848 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587392550143 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4252000512 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.166666667 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0833333333 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237889330921 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838878738666 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319191880557 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12495248679 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276776158825 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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