Some people say that cars are best to use in cities while others think that bicycles are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The development of technology since the industrial revolution provides us with an assortment of transport which enables easier commuting. While some cities such as Copenhagen and Tokyo encourages people to use bicycles due to environmental concerns, most cities widely use cars as the major tool in their daily lives. There is not any universial solution to transportation as each city varies in terms of size, population, city planning, etc.
A bicycle is known for its versatility and adaptability -- it can be used by different age groups and in different landscapes. With its purely mechanical structure, it does not require any fuels or electricity and thus, not generate any pollutants or waste that is harmful to the environments. Moreover, given its small size and slim body, it allows users to pass through narrow streets or pedestrian road to avoid traffic congestion. However, the speed of a bicycle is significantly lower than other types of transportation, and it imposes greater danger to users when traffic accidents occur, as large body surface area is exposed to the air.
On the other hand, the overall performance of a car is considered higher. A car excels in speed that greatly reduces the time spent on public transport. Furthermore, it has an unique feature of privacy which many people value. Yet, the overuse of private cars nowadays is one of the main causes of global warming and air pollution. Nonetheless, during peak hours, traffic congestion occur frequently and ironically, consuming more time than using bicycle or other public transport. cities with a large population such as Beijing is subjected to heavy traffic jam every day for more than four hours.
both bicycle and car have its goods and bads that should be taken into account. For an all-rounded result, it is advisable for cities to adopt both in order to maximize efficiency, at the same time, minimize its impacts on the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, thus, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13924050633 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90383646547 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629746835443 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9330550909 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206388657482 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636874622087 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632331266055 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121528411991 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513665663589 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.