Some people say that drug companies have the responsibility to spend money on researching medicine to help the poorer countries while others think the main responsibility of drug companies is making money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Whilst increasing number of new drugs has been developed today, many people in the third world do not have chance to get proper medical treatment. Some people suggest that the pharmaceutical companies should invest programs to make medicine for those nations, yet I disagree with this opinion.
On the one hand, People criticise drug makers that they only produce high-profitable medicine instead of affordable one for the general public in the world. The demand of medication is not satisfied in several developing countries, especially in Africa. Congo is the country that aptly illustrates this situation. After continual revolution and civil war in successive years, the economic system broke down. The authorities are not able to afford even the basic medical infrastructure and the drugs while the people are suffering from the epidemic diseases, such as malaria and cholera. The pharmaceutical firms have to take their social responsibility, developing drugs to help all humankind, including the needy.
However, I support the view that pharmaceutical companies should pursue the biggest profit rather than put their money in inventing medicine for people under the poverty line. Large amount of money allows them to pay the bills, taxes as well as wages. Without enough revenue, they can neither maintain their facilities, nor produce conventional drug, not to mention researching for the new ones. Therefore, making money is the priority of pharmaceutical firms. Governments or inter-government organisations, such as UN or WHO, should take actions to ameliorate the condition. Pharmaceutical firms can assist the authorities, but not the major contributors.
To conclude, although pharmaceutical firms is responsible for developing drugs to help people around the world, especially the developing nations, I contend that making profits is still their priority. Without adequate financial supports, it is impossible for the firms to produce medicine for people to fight diseases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...icine instead of affordable one for the general public in the world. The demand of medication ...
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Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
... The authorities are not able to afford even the basic medical infrastructure and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, therefore, third, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6357615894 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10828221995 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7221089472 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237079873383 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068231987084 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515560281009 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143043429992 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194013811551 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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