SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT E-BOOKS AND MODERN TECHNOLOGY WILL TOTALLY REPLACE TRADITIONAL NEWSPAPER AND MAGAZINES. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.
Technology has flourished by lips and bounds providing us new avenues and keeping ourselves updated with latest news. Nevertheless, the fair amount of people believe that conventional way of reading newspaper will disappear soon, thanks to profound opportunities of advanced technology. However, I don’t completely accord on this point of view and I am keen on the idea that newspaper will always meet the growing demand due to its cheap price and easiest way of being informed.
To embark on, I can bring myriad of reasons why traditional way of reading news from newspapers keep remaining popular for vast majority of people. First and foremost, most people have an ardent habit to read news from newspapers and they are not going to put aside a tradition dating back for hundreds of years. They are waiting desperately every days for morning papers, in order to begin their day with reading news and drinking a cup of tea or coffee. It helps them relax and be motivated. Secondly, newspaper are portable and it can be carried from one place to another in bag or handy. They don’t even need electricity and other appliances. Everything is extremely simple, just buy and read. Sometimes we find diversity of attachments in newspapers. For example, I always enjoy looking such attachments regarding to culinary and fashion in newspapers.
However, technical success has overwhelmed and provides easy access to be informed about everything significant happening in the world. It also allows us to watch videos and listen recordings, We can even download it, share with others and write our comments online. The benefits we get due to cutting-edge technology is irreplaceable.
To conclude, advanced technology have changed our lives drastically, but in my point of view, it will be not an exaggeration to say technical achievements cannot pose treat to newspaper and magazine and seclude them from the news making industry.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...w avenues and keeping ourselves updated with latest news. Nevertheless, the fair amount of ...
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Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s of years. They are waiting desperately every days for morning papers, in order ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17197452229 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91780234599 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.211340882 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109619051534 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308625431338 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353699677079 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687531045611 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333178702206 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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