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The reading passage and the talk are both about the efficiency comparison between the storing methods of medical records.
The article states that the digitalization of the medical data has a myriad comparative advantages over the paper-based storing. The author believes that maintaining the records in electronic databases reduces drastically the costs related to the copying, faxing and transporting the documents. Moreover, it’s claimed that the digitalization also solves the problem of the storage place, where the hand-written documents are accumulated and stored.
However, the speaker casts doubts on the arguments made in the text, asserting that the even after being imported to the electronic databases, the papers will be maintained for legal and backup purposes.
According to the reading, the new method would minimize the human factor and help doctors eschew the medical errors resulted by illegible handwriting. The speaker in her turn, challenges this statement by noting that in both cases the doctors create new records by using pen and paper, after which, administrative workers import the hand-written data into digital databases. This is to say, the risk of human factor is not being managed.
The final argument brought forth by the author in favor of electronic storing is that it provides health workers with access to the databases which are accustomed to receive queries and display the necessary information in an organized and coherent way.
Yet the speaker is of the opinion that the access to the databases can not be guaranteed as they represent subject of privacy laws and therefore can be banned by the patients who want to keep their data private.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dvantages over the paper-based storing. The author believes that maintaining the re...
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Line 8, column 153, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to receiving'.
Suggestion: accustomed to receiving
... with access to the databases which are accustomed to receive queries and display the necessary infor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 267.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3670411985 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82896765186 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6641407273 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.3 110.228320801 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06452816374 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.3589403974 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.8541721854 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.42419426049 122% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 63.6247240618 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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