In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impse a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
More and more people today consume fast food, which results in several health issues. Some people believe that in order to minimize its consumption, it is the governments responsibility to raise the taxes for such type of food. In this essay I strongly agree with that opinion, taking into consideration that government’s role is to organize better life for its citizens. Higher taxes will affect the price of junk food, it will also reduce its consumption, thus bringing to better health level of the population.
It is widely known that one of the main advantages of the cenvenience food is its low price. People choose this food not merely because of its quick preparation, but also cosidering its price. For example, a person who wishes to lunch somewhere and has a choice betwn Mcdonalds and an Italian restaurant, will prefer the former due to its cheaper price, while in terms of food quality it is obvious that the Italian restaurant would win. Therefore, there is no doubt that if the increase in taxes will bring to higher prices of fast food, people will choose higher quality food over the faster-made ones.
Secondly, tax increase will lead to a change in locations of fast food, moving them far from the central streets. As a general rule, a huge portion of the product cost is the price for the rent. Considering the fact that higher taxes will forse the fast food producers to cut other expenditures, they will most probably try to minimize the renting costs, moving the business to cheaper places that, in general, are not on the central streets. On a whole, this will lead to minizing fast food usage quantity.
To conclude, I believe that as high is the tax on jank food, as less it will be eaten by the population, thus resluting in less obesity and helthier lifestyle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in general, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80707395498 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62953316004 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540192926045 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7147213716 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268059417707 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109318818363 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505563570813 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160848584753 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646409679283 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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