In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Nowadays, junk food is more and more interested by people in all over the world. This leads to an increasing number of people who live with various health issues. It is believed that the government should have a significant taxing of fast food in order to reduce those health problems. In my opinion, I both agree and disagree with the view point.
On the one hand, fast food should get a higher tax due to the numerous disadvantages it brings. Firstly, the most-see problems of people who like eating fast food is weight-gaining. Junk food can contain a very high amount of fat ingredients, and the excessive consumption of this kind of food may end up with rapid weight gain. Moreover, people who eat a lot of junk food are at a higher risk of heart diseases than others. The higher number of health problems, the higher treatment costs those people with have to pay. And finally, average life expectancy will be lower and lower.
On the second hand, I think that the government shouldn't impose a higher tax on pre-made food but try to find other solutions. To begin with, if the taxes are too high, customers cannot afford to buy fast food and therefore causes the decline of profits in many fast food companies and of course the salary of workers. So instead of paying high taxes, we can do something different. Raising public awareness in junk food is very necessary. People should have a balanced diet, try to eat more vegetables and fruit and make healthier food choices. In addition, we must take regular exercise to prevent health problems.
To conclude, I do agree with the opinion, however, I still support my point of view on another solutions that the government can take and I belive that people should have a balance between eating healthy food and eating fast food.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7124600639 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5149310682 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539936102236 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4311821008 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7647058824 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367809083211 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11526212815 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590389495867 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237268607502 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022229159539 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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