Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One school of thought holds that the only method to tackle starvation and poverty is enhancing the economy. While this perception is somewhat justifiable, I would stand on the other view that economic growth must be prevented because it increasingly damages the environment based on some reasons discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, the option of promoting the economy seems to be a great tool to face up poverty and hunger. This argument sheds light on numerous enterprises and businesses that gain success in their market, which contribute to the nation’s budget. Therefore, this huge amount of money will be allocated to building houses or making a charitable donation to support lower classes. Moreover, other economic sectors can provide people from poverty opportunities and jobs to secure their living standards and have a sustainable income. By doing this, starvation will be ended and create a large number of strong labor to contribute and create other great benefits for residents.
On the other hand, there are myriads of compelling reasons as I am convinced that it is of paramount importance to stop economic growth. To be illustrated, the growth in the economy means that numerous hazardous activities are created to satisfy the demand of massive production. For example, farmers are likely to use more fertilizers and chemicals to promote the development of plants while it can be seen that many factories release an amount of carbon dioxide to the surrounding environments. As a result, in the long term, it can lead to an ecology crisis and raise more fatal diseases for both animals and humans. Therefore, the next generation can not experience the beautification of the earth and may have to live in a terrible environment that is the result of economic growth.
In conclusion, although promoting the economy can bring many benefits such as providing jobs or creating strong labor to deal with hunger and poverty, I believe that the outcomes that damage the environment from hazardous activities and destroy ecosystems for the next generations alert people to prevent economic growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19241982507 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84902756571 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3060109039 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288781237031 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093625271613 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762879320853 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177981091814 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063777440242 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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