Some companies sponsor sport and sport stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are a growing number of enterprises that sponsor sports celebrities to advertise their products or and services. While some people believe that it could be fraught with pitfalls, others said that it is beneficial. From my perspective, I agree with those who consider that the drawbacks outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, sponsorship can bring huge potential benefits for both sports stars and business. Firstly, associating the products with the healthy and popular banner of stars enables the enterprise to improve its public image and break into new markets. As a result, these companies will attract more customers, and earn a large number of profits to put their position on a global scale. Secondly, in terms of celebrities, this marketing strategy may help them be paid higher salaries and trained full time to increase their standard. For example, Tom Hanks receives 500 dollars after he appears on the international television of Nike advertisements, and raises his reputation overnight.
On the other hand, there are a myriad of compelling reasons as I am convinced that sponsorships can have numerous advantages based on two main reasons. First and foremost, numerous companies use sponsorships as an only purpose to gain profits, not pay attention to customers' health. For instance, by partnering with Rolando in the latest advertising campaign to introduce their best medical products, which a supplement for cyclists do increase their stamina, they have received numerous arguments and complaints about the quality of products from users. Moreover, the partnership between sports stars and enterprises has encouraged a competitive habit when it comes to havina match. By having awareness of maximizing their profit from the business, sports celebrities will use illegal drugs and substances to increase their physical health and have a concept of winning at all costs of attitude.
In conclusion, I am of the view that sponsorship brings a lot of disadvantages because of the reduced join between competitors and giving customers diseases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s will attract more customers, and earn a large number of profits to put their position on a glob...
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Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...hem be paid higher salaries and trained full time to increase their standard. For example...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ight. On the other hand, there are a myriad of compelling reasons as I am convinced...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41358024691 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96874435961 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3143217438 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.285714286 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151492807955 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516422048836 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515174584498 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955480631116 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043708682408 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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