Some people say that family is the most powerful influence in a child's development. Others say that other factors such as television, friends and music play a greater role today?
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
There is no doubt that with developing technology it has become very hard to control on children's growth. There are many think that parents have a great importance on their children because they live at the same house. In general, in this essay I will discuss both sides before arriving at a conclusion.
To begin with, parents play a vital role in kid's development. This means children spend most their time at home with their parents, so they impact directly on their kids, through noticing thier behaviour with them and then they start stimulate them in bad or good attitude. For instance, reading is one of my favourite hobby, I started reading stories books when I was in 8 years old. My parents especially mother reads a lot of books. I improved reading skill by my mother because she encouraged me to read more than 10 novels annually until i got a gift. From that, I developed some soft skills such as critical thinking, writing skill and getting knowledge. As a consequence of that,in children period, parents can affect significantly on their kids in a good method.
On the other and, allows me to present that sometimes media means can influence specific in entertainment field. In other words, kids prefer to watch cartoon films on kids channels if they have free time (4-7) hours. So these cartoons promote particular ideas which impact considerably on kids through applying as part of daily habits. To illustrate, there are numerous singers in Arabic World product albums for kids. This occurs because there many children listen to their music and records. Clearly, sometimes external environment may influence on kid's development.
To sum up, I strongly believe that kids should become under parental supervision because parents have a right to impact on them. Also, they love them even becoming a beneficial elements in their communities in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, for instance, in general, no doubt, such as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62658672684 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632587859425 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5393632749 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9444444444 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0711138461144 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252509200914 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336141246632 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0387222394751 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299288974672 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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