Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in childrens others say that they should be taught to becone cooperative.
What is your opinion?
Children are the future of any nation and they are required to be taught the true values in life. So therefore, a group of people are considering that children should learn to become a competitive where other contradicts this view by saying that parents should teach their children to become co operative. I will check both the view points along with my opinion.
According to the first school of thoughts, competition is very vital in the every domain. Firstly, these days competition is everywhere sp parents should teach their wards about the value of competition. By competition every children become self-confident and try to do a lot of hard work to win the competition. Secondly, children are becoming a best decision taking and they know the values of being competitive. Thirdly, there are many competition for an instance as, dance competition, singing competition, quiz competition and many more where the children show their hidden abilities. So they feel worthy to themselves.
According to the second school of thoughts, coöperation is better than competition. The prime one is that, cooperative children can learn many things like as patience, team work, calmness and so on. These values are helpful to develop overall personality of the children. Further, children are participating in the competition and the result in rivalry feeling of others which do not take a time to convert into jealousy and they become self centered. This people do not get frame in the society.
Overall, after discussing both views, I feel that both values have its importance. Thus, a child should be brought up by imparting both equally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...jealousy and they become self centered. This people do not get frame in the society....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15355805243 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8873028167 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4460219618 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291144153854 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850204188664 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663698620406 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175132241948 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08264073871 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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