Some people say the government should not put money into building theatres and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The topic about what amount should government spend in which sector has always been debated because it is government's duty to ensure well-being of its nation by making sensible investment in every sectors, be it education, health care, agriculture, sports or any other sector. different policies have varying demands for different sectors but the amount they can invest is very limited. So, all people have their own opinions on proper sectorial investment.
When it comes down to my opinion, I totally disagree on not putting any money into theatres and sports stadiums because this is what improves the relationship and friendliness in between multiple countries. if we have a peek into studies conducted regarding the impact of sports in relationship between two countries then we can identify cruciality of theatres and sports sector. Apart from International friendship, these also help in promoting tourism considerably.
Obviously, Stating the importance of investing in building theatres and sports stadium doesn't necessarily mean that we should totally abandon investing on medical care and education. Infact, we definitely need to invest a lot more for medical care and education, because, if we are to rank all the building blocks for nation's prosperity in terms of importance, education and medical care rank way higher than sports and theatres since health, knowledge and wisdom decide prosperity of the country and its citizens. but if citizens do not have proper education and health then there is no point at all to invest in sports and theatres.
To conclude, in my opinion, government must prioritise education and medical care from and investment point of view but it would be a blunder to deprive theatres and sports stadium from investments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, well, apart from, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32857142857 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8442566548 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9891764737 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.2 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276122267291 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990267949371 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669031280127 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152078469575 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243416552737 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.