Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects. Others think that in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
The world is growing up and in this period the advancement in technology creating differences. However, In this era, some people, believe that history as a school subject is important while others think that science and technology are more necessary, in this essay, I will explain both the view according to my perspective science and technology are highly recommended at the school level.
Certainly, the world is moving towards advancement in all aspects nobody wants to look back, that is the reason science becomes highly important for instance if you are applying for a job you must have basic knowledge of computer if you want to do farming there is also use of technology so, the requirement of science and technology skills are increasing tremendously because of that its become a part of our life in comparison to history. we are well educated not getting enough salary if technological less sound. I personally know the importance of science in my life because I was a science student.
On the other hand, history is important many people having this view, though many writers saying that we have a huge past for learning because the human being is the only creature on earth planet who becomes smarter after studying the past, so history is also important for the student at school level after learning that they know the sacrifices of the elders for their freedom though they will do something for their nation and definitely it gives them a good nationalistic feeling. but in contrast, technology and science in recent decades are much more needed.
Incapsulation, science, and technology are important subject at the school level as compare to history, I totally agree with the first statement because in this high tech world where everything is just distance from an enter on the keyboard though they should have the knowledge of it at basic and at the root level.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: aspects'; aspect's
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Suggestion: But
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95899053628 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70005747758 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539432176656 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.379968746 49.4020404114 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.5 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.625 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285979624588 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122359504402 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879531834122 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176278639432 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846192736709 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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