Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
One of the most debating topics for both parents and students is what is the most integral subject. Although, some might argue that History is more essential in regard to children's education, but in my opinion, Science and Technology are better.
There are many reasons why History is always a compulsory subject for pupils. First, it educates students on their nations' origins, their glorious past and how the ancestors had overcome obstacles to built the country from ruins. For example, in Vietnam, children have been taught about numerous tragic wars that the nation had fought to protect it. As a result, from a young age, students will learn to be more appreciative and deferential towards older generations, great leaders of the country. Beside, these lessons also reinforce their patriotism. Second, History is conducive to learning other subjects like Literature. Most of what pupils learn in this subject is in form of stories and it helps to enrich their vocabulary. Moreover, other countries' history is also infused in the curriculum which broadens students' knowledge of different cultures that can be applied to essays.
While History seems to be the superior subject to some, for me, i believe Science and Technology play a more important part. First, students can form logical thinking from these subjects. They are more scientific, research-based which give pupils a more critical views on matters. For instance, when encountering a problem, children will know how to extract a strategic plan based on their surrounding and knowledge from biology and physic lessons to come up with a rational solution. Second, in the world of development, technology is on the rise which is why these subjects will be more favorable. Students will learn about the structures of machines, how to operate them or even how to improve them. As a result, it is easier for pupils who have graduated to apply for a job as they are more up-to-date with modern devices. The knowledge and skills they have acquired from these subjects will not become obsolete.
In conclusion, Science and Technology will always be more essential in children's education than History because they are more suitable in today's world. I believe in the future, Science and Technology will continue to be the trending subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17112299465 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71296606851 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521390374332 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1735746091 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219393040276 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07219356609 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066300228892 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158115236833 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512597203123 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.