Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, in this technological and scientific era, it goes without saying that students have to increase their focus on study scientific techniques. On the contrary, I and many other people still believe that other subjects such as history still play an indispensable part to the development of the country.
To begin with, it is easy to see that the contact between students and technical science impacts strongly on their future. Hence, if the tutor has a better knowledge which is more suitable to the geometry of the future economy, he or she will have such a brighter prospect. Furthermore, concentrating more to some specific courses such as techniques or science students can reduce the large amount of unnecessary learning which has less meaning to the future income. Therefore, they can save their times and money for other interesting things.
On the other hand, I still believe that people have their point on saying that other subjects especially history still play an undeniable role in the development of the country. Firstly, every ground breaking technologies must be appropriate to the culture and the lifestyle of the region which they apply in. Therefore, if the native people do not accept the techniques, it cannot be success no matter how fantastic it is. Moreover, the history depick the mistakes made in the past, hence helping learners , the future business man or the future business woman to avoid the similar one in the future. Secondly, understanding about the history will develop tutors patriotism as well as give them the inspiration to study for the brighter destination of the country.
Besides of studying technical and scientific subjects, studying other ones will enhance learners understanding about the well rounded perspective of life
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82098734923 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7249220232 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.583333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5833333333 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16427853621 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056623198039 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356443642573 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964663266087 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323813770045 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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