It is often argued that the extinction of flora and fauna is the most important environmental issue, whilst others disagree and think that there are more serious environmental matters. The main problem, in my opinion, is related to other issues such as the change of climate conditions that need to be meticulously addressed.
On the one hand, there are several reasons behind the loss of biodiversity. Firstly, because certain types of animals are used for research purposes in laboratories, there has a considerable reduction in their numbers. Secondly, human beings are expanding urban areas and constructing factories by leaving a tiny part of lands for plants to grow and, consequently, those plants are dying out. As a result, this loss of vegetation and animals is leading to various challenges for people since their lives are interdependent on lives of other living beings. To illustrate, trees and flowers usually provide clean and fresh atmosphere for humans to reside, and if they disappear, people may lose one of the most important sources of their oxygen and pure environment.
On the other hand, the opponents of this view think that other issues, such as climate change, are of paramount importance. In other words, solving the problem related animals and plants is more realistic and requires the attention of humans, while the problems related to climate is hard to tackle and need several decades. For instance, according to researchers from the university of Oxford, they have been studying this matter over decades, yet they have not been able to find the solutions and it is likely to require another century to fully understand it. In fact, many people and industries around the world have been suffering from changing weather conditions for several years.
In conclusion, although the loss of particular species of plants and animals is one of the dominant issues, other environmental problems are more prevalent and need a careful investigation. I tend to believe that climate related matters are serious enough to put much efforts on them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...lated matters are serious enough to put much efforts on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18507462687 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81005418888 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0028269986 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.615384615 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5384615385 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247880164503 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852725789976 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819410158247 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164524714418 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548979171154 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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