Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is some voice claiming that the primary issue of the current environment is the extinction of specific species. Nobody can deny that this does mean a lot to human beings, however, it is by no means the only problem that we should care about, as we will see.
On the one hand, it may appear clear that the extinction of creature holds key of the environmental stability. Those loss exerts negative impacts on food chains, leading to even more fierce environmental problems which can be much more difficult to tackle. For instance, the extinction of preys means a loss of food for other species, which will end up with a dwindling number of those species in the near future as well. Furthermore, loss of particular type of creatures reduces the diversity of species in their habitats. To be more specific, they might be ruined easily than before and it takes them more time to recover from damages such as fire or flood.
On the other hand, we have to ask whether this is the only problem we should focus on. Global warming is often concerned in this case, and if we neglected this severe problem, it is inevitable that individuals would suffer from disasters caused by this environmental issue such as heavy rain or typhoon. What is more is that, people are expected to live in a place without air pollution as well, and governments should take that into account too, health problems assosiated with citizens' lungs or throats may be the consequences. Equally, it seem that those issues I mentioned above can in some cases trigger environmental diasters.
To conclude, it appears that, while creatures' extinction is fairly essential for our environment protection, there are many other factors we should focus on when cosider about environmental problems too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this loss' or 'Those losses'?
Suggestion: This loss; Those losses
...lds key of the environmental stability. Those loss exerts negative impacts on food chains,...
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Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...ts may be the consequences. Equally, it seem that those issues I mentioned above can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, such as, in some cases, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69192000872 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2163779325 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203142535002 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073841089917 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333485517813 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118865447396 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484450376413 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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