some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other says that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether the extinction of certain plants and animals is the major problem associated with environment or whether there are other environmental problems that deserve more notice. While I understand why some people consider the loss of specific creatures as the most essential problem, I am still in favor of the latter view.
It is understandable why people believe that the sharp reduce in several species is the biggest environmental issue to be concerned. From their point of view, the number of species in recent years has dropped a great deal which can give rise to unbalanced ecosystem. This situation can be the result of overexploitation of natural resources. In other words, many illegal hunts are conducted throughout the year, which makes plenty of animals on the verge of extinction. In addition, devastating forests to make room for residential areas destroys a number of natural habitats. Not only does this action result in the loss of shelters of many species but also the disappearance of various plants.
Nevertheless, I still side with those who believe that there are more important problems related to environment needed to be care about. To put it in a simple way, such problems that cause detrimental effects to people’s health should be in top priority. One illustration for this is the degradation of air quality in recent years. If people inhale such polluted air, they have a higher risk of suffering from respiratory diseases such as lung cancer. Moreover, the ozone layer whose purpose is to deter ultraviolet rays from entering the atmosphere has been destroyed gradually. This explains for the increase in the number of patients who face skin cancer as they expose to the harmful rays in a regular basis.
In conclusion, despite acknowledging why some people hold the belief that the most remarkable environmental problem is associated with the loss of particular animals and plants, I am of the opinion that other issues that directly affect human’s health is more prominent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14457831325 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90884645857 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575301204819 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3434521325 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.866666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280670151526 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779982597406 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861392207131 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189500088582 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981548096321 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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