Some people say that mobile phone plays a major role in their professional life. Others say it plays more important role in their personal life. Discuss both sides. What is your opinion?
The smart phones are one of the latest and most innovative inventions of modern science. It have lots of benefits in our personal and professional lives. It is believed by some people that it has several uses in our professional lives, others think that it has positive impact on our personal lives. In my opinion, I agree with both statement and also believe that the impact of the mobile phones, nowadays, are beyond description.
The smartphones make our professional lives more convenient. For businessman and officials, it is one of the most important device to deal with different business and official work. It is helpful for solving different problems in professional lives. For instance, smartphones have built in Microsoft office application that help to solve official problem without the help of the computer and laptop, it is not much heavy to carry.
On the other hand, in our personal lives, the smartphones play a crucial role. We can now communicate with our friends and family very easily by using it. Video calls are now available in the smartphones. We can now watch our loving one from a long distance via the mobile phones. Besides this, there are different applications are available in the smartphones that help in our transportation. For example, UBER is a ride sharing application, one’s can call car or motorbike without any hassle for traveling. For this reason, we do not have to wait for long time for public bus, it saves of time.
To sum up, undoubtedly, the smart phones have tremendous effects on our professional and personal lives. In this modern world, we can not ignore the benefits of the smartphones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99637681159 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88699462681 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528985507246 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8452615606 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1176470588 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110944416584 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421145204909 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532636418683 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716659290474 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346462811732 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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