Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this technological and consumerism era, shopping has already become much more convenient for everyone since people can shop on e-commerce websites. But there are some difficulties that people often face when shopping online. I would argue that shopping online is far more beneficial for people.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why shopping online had become a reference for many people. Firstly, many e-commerce sites allow people to check and research for their chosen products before making payment. For instance, they can read reviews from previous buyers and compare the products that they want to buy. Secondly, the payment process has made shopping online becoming popular since it offers a wide range of paying methods such as scanning QR codes, which is the most advanced way of making payment. Therefore people do not have to travel a long distance and carry money to buy whatever they want. Not to mention about the diversity of e-commerce retailers, there are many reliable sites, such as Amazon and eBay which provide a massive number of different product that meet people’s demand.
On the other hand, the are some reason why some people do not favour the idea of purchasing products on online. First, in terms of searching for the detail of the product, because there are too many choices for them to look for, and many e-commerce retailers even claim that their products and services are the best and can only be found on their sites. As a result, consumers may find it hard to choose which products is suite to them. Another common drawback is that people can not try the products before making a purchase. For example, a woman can not try wearing a dress to see whether or not it fits to her body. Furthermore, modern technology is sometimes not a user-friendly, especially for the elderly, since they may not get accustomed to the use of technological devices.
In conclusion, though there are some unfavourable views about shopping online, I firmly believe that modern technology has made shopping more diverse and convenient for everyone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...he most advanced way of making payment. Therefore people do not have to travel a long dis...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...et people’s demand. On the other hand, the are some reason why some people do not favo...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...oman can not try wearing a dress to see whether or not it fits to her body. Furthermore, moder...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99711815562 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58390416274 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547550432277 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8998606586 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153290386438 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596607696831 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615989712756 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127784107101 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617267959394 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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