Some people say that music is a good way to bring people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, music have become an inseparable part of human life. Some argue that it plays a crucial role in creating close relationship among people of various cultures and ages. I totally agree that music is an important means of communication.
In general, music is considered as a universal language that many people might have the same understanding and feeling, in the sense that there is no matter of people’s ages or cultural backgrounds. For this reason, while people are listening to the music, they obtain the message to some extent despite having no idea of the context. For instance, whenever a one is singing a music, other people may do this alongside, more precisely, they could manage to find the rhythm of the music which would bring them a great deal of emotions. In addition to singing, music could be a powerful tool, provided that people have been learning foreign languages for several years.
Moreover, being as an art, music is associated with the cultural values of the nations. This ranges from classical to computer-aided genres which are adored evenly among different societies. For example, on the internet popular music can draw attentions of billions of people from various countries in which the age category varies from the youth to senior citizens. Therefore, the relationship between these people are likely to be strengthened by this art.
In conclusion, music is of importance in the globe for being ubiquitous and valuable. I believe that it would solely enhance relationship between culture and make them closer than it used to be.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75235240966 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5130125247 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29924992235 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10219701646 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519494728587 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159613682373 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785450672119 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.