In the day and age, music is composited by various languages and generations and becomes a part of our life. A lot of people believe that music is a good method to make people living around the world have close-knit relationship. I strongly agree this opinion. The following is presenting reasons for that.
Firstly, Music promotes the same feeling between each other including among strangers. In the contemporary world, the more society has been always under pressures, there more music is highly appreciated. Because, we want to find some same soul within varying language in some tones and lyrics. In this regard, it would be more interesting to discover the mood and thinking of the composers and some motivations to overcome the same situations. For instant, the song called " I do not care" of HoaChenYu caring the massage to all who are always paying attention to one another eyes. In that song, we can learn to protect myself against the standard of society and become unique. So Music could effect on every aspects of our life throughout our soul and then make us believe that having a person who is like us in some place worldwide.
Secondly, music help human being be incorporated into one another. I mean that the listeners who love music created a group, without distinguishing the ages and the national, because they have the same hobby. As a result, a new environment is made to cooperate other people naturally. BTS fans, for example, is one the the biggest international fans group of Korean Kpop band, called Army. If there is any activities relating to BTS, all fans will doing together to express that they love BTS.
In conclusion, It is significant to realize that the influences of music to human's relationship is appreciated. Nowadays, we can feel the same feeling when just listening a songs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...up of Korean Kpop band, called Army. If there is any activities relating to BTS, all fans will doing to...
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...tivities relating to BTS, all fans will doing together to express that they love BTS....
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...el the same feeling when just listening a songs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i mean, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90967741935 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7511117798 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606451612903 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5015655397 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183463923366 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497245258645 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473780210199 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107191336961 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660290997395 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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