Some people say that now that we can see films at our home there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a theatre. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people are polarised into two almost equal groups regarding the notion of whether watching movies at the theatres is more beneficial or watching them at the comfort of home. In the following paragraphs, I would shed light on both the approaches before making a final note.
To commence with the first notion of watching movies at the theatres, there are numerous things to be shared in its favor. First and foremost, the theatres are equipped with dolby sound systems and a huge 70mm or a 35mm Screen. As a result, people will have a great experience watching the cinema. Secondly, the atmosphere that is created inside a theatre is something that every individual looks out for. It being dark, enables people to concentrate on the plot of the movie more effectively. Consequently, a better understanding of the movie leads to better entertainment.
Shifting to the second school of thought, watching movies at home is associated with less expenses. In other words, it is pocket-friendly. There is no need for people to spend huge amounts of money to watch a single movie. Just a mere subscription to an OTT Platform would give access to thousands of movies for the people to watch. Hence, a certain set of people prefer this mode of watching. Moreover, people can watch movies at their convenient time slot. They won't be bound to any show timings like how it is with the theatres. Therefore, quite a chunk people who are always busy with their work prefer at-home movies as they allow them to watch the cinema whenever they find time.
Having discussed the arguments and its counterparts, I would like to infer that the choice at the end scales down to an individual's will and liking. To justify my state of mind, there is an instance of a family that I personally know, the elders of which prefer watching the movies at home whereas their children are strictly against this idea. Everyone has a different state of mind and preference, so acting based on what is more suitable for them is something that will be appreciated on the long run.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun expenses is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ching movies at home is associated with less expenses. In other words, it is pocket-...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, as a result, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80563380282 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68984439042 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557746478873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0504248153 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7894736842 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153918720735 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502754584969 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262616093153 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943393533506 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264092700726 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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